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Thats Sweet! ^_^ and everyone can relate to it too
Lovely! <333
everyone can relate?? how?
Poor anon, forever alone.
http://i957.photobucket.com/albums/ae52/rickan01/GIFs/forever_alone_face.png
D: Poor anon.
I’m not the same anon, but I understand where they are coming from. I’m a lesbian…
you should be embarresed at you’re shitty poetry. i wasted moments of my life on your worthless words, and i will never get them back. screw you. take this shit off stumbleupon. it doesn’t deserve to be on there… loser
Really? are you that rude and ignorant? if you dont like it dont freaking read it, no one is forcing you too. and you’re a guy i bet you wouldnt say that if your girlfriend wrote this and gave it to you now would you
Actually, someone *does* kind of force us to read this. Stumbleupon directs us here, so it’s not like we were wandering around this website. A simple Stumble button is what it takes to get us here, directly to this link. That is what Steve is against.
About what the picture says; I don’t find it sincere. This is not for boyfriends to read; this is for the girls themselves to read and convince themselves that they are “in love.” No girl should ever, EVER give this to her boyfriend and expect him to be happy with this. We all know you talk to other guys. But the point is, that is absolutely and perfectly normal! Why would you ever need to defend yourself for something like this? Or maybe this is just for defending yourself against yourselves?
genius statement
you obviously don’t understand that there are crazy men that get angry at their girlfriend/wife for talking to other guys. Especially when they see the gut make them laugh or things of that nature.
I know there are people like that, one of my ex-girlfriends ended up with a guy like that. But why date/marry such a person? There can be a few exceptional cases where the man gets “crazy” after they get married, but how could anyone feel affection for someone who literally holds you captive? Is it the Stockholm syndrome? What’s the problem with normal guys who actually let their girlfriends live their lives the way they want?
you sound stupid. Stumbleupon directs people to blogs all the time, this is one person’s opinion, you can disagree with it but you can’t completely discredit it. The internet is a place where people can share what they believe, and while I agree with you that no girl should give this to a guy, its poetry. The purpose of blogging, the purpose of poetry is to express emotion, and if someone else reads this and has felt the same way its helpful. Also all the people disputing this are men. Stumbleupon does not FORCE you to read anything, just press the stumble button if you don’t want one person’s perspective.
I want everybody else’s perspective, not one’s.
You are right, I see this kind of blogs all the time. And all the comments below them go no deeper than “Aww, how cute! <3" This is the first time I ever see that such "poetry" is challenged and actually being thought on. Because of this challenge, people who don't agree don't have to press Stumble immediately anymore, for both opinions are voiced now in these comments. I love this. I love reading your reply, I love your calling me stupid, I love thinking about what you have just said.. About the fact that the people who disagree are all men; you're right, but how does that make our claim weaker? In fact, being the receivers of this poem, maybe we are in a better position to understand what this truly means. About the feelings part; there's the problem, not all feelings are helpful. Some feelings can be wrong; there could have been suicidal poems like this as well, for instance. This is acceptably not the best analogy; but the damage done here, with this poem, is actually much more subtle. Why let girls accept their fate of being isolated from other men? Why try to justify a situation that should already be perfectly normal? And if their boyfriends are not jerks and actually are okay with their girlfriends' speaking with other guys, why feel the need to defend in the first place? (I feel like I'm starting to repeat myself, so please reread my previous comments.) Don't you feel that there is something wrong here? Not with the sharing of emotions (which I personally love too), but with the emotion itself?
I Agree with annoyed and all ready wasted enough time
I like your words sir. But I can understand both sides. The post that started the fire was so offensive to women that love shoving sappy poetry in their boyfriend’s faces that it could almost be an efficient troll. Although I wouldn’t show this to my boyfriend, because it might raise questions as to if I actually talk to other men with feelings other than friendship. We do have one little rhyme we share, and it’s from Winnie the Pooh and I am proud of it!
I see what you mean about this poem perhaps encouraging the entrapment of women in bad relationships. But I think people may be focusing too much on the extremes. For instance, the guy in the situation doesn’t have to be a controlling jerk for this poem to be relevant. It could be a guy who has low self-esteem, sees his girlfriend having fun with other guys and feel bad, insecure, and/or inferior. This, I think, is a much more realistic and relevant scenario, in which case something like this (not necessarily in poem form, but possibly, depending on the guy) could be helpful to calm the boyfriend’s fears or insecurity, even if for a limited amount of time. I know if I was feeling insecure or threatened something like this could make me feel a little bit better. This is just my take on it, but I hope someone else finds it to be reasonable.
I agree, my boyfriend sometimes gets a little down and just needs a small reminder to boost his self esteem. Regardless, I don’t think you should be mad at what is on stumbleupon. Its okay to dislike some of the sites you’re taken to, that’s why there is a thumbs-down button!
If you hate this site so much why the hell are you still here and commenting? You really need to stop trying to get attention in this way. The point of the poetry is to express oneself, stop bashing on the poem. If you don’t like this get a life and get off of the internet, go outside.
I don’t hate this website. I actually quite liked some of the posts here. Why did you assume that I hate this site?
Poems are for expressing oneself and making the others *think* about what one says. ATTENTION? Excuse me? I’m a university student and I very much have a life, thank you! I keep coming back here to read what people have said now at study breaks, just for a nice discussion. If all what I’ve said seemed just an attempt to get attention, I can only be sad for you. It seems like we couldn’t make you think over the poem at all.
i agree with you, if you dont like this poem then dont say anything about it. seriously, you dont have to get so freakin butt hurt over it. there was absolutely no reason for ‘steve’ to flip out so badly over it, its not about him and if he didnt like it, he could of just hit the ‘stumble’ button again instead of writing his stupid anger on someone elses poem. not everyones a poet, sorry we all cant please the mighty ‘steve’ and cant meet up to his standards
mr. cutera?
emm yeah ur not forced to read it he could have just clicked stumble again and thats it!
I am a girl and i agree with Mr. C on its for girls not there boyfriends. But you should also ignore the idiots that yell at you for putting your thoughts out there.
dear mr. c,
suck my dick.
amanda
Who says she was trying to defend herself? And who are you to say that this was insincere? If she felt strong enough to write a poem/blurb about this subject, then it was obviously sincere in her heart. She was brave enough to post this to the internet where cowards like you hide behind their computers and put down others that are probably more talented then you ever could be. Don’t judge, just admire.
This is anonymous, sweetie. It’s not Laura’s. If you can track the original source in the whole blogosphere, that’s fine; but it’s almost certain that the author has no idea about what’s going on here. And who are YOU to say that all poems are sincere? Does the mere fact that something is expressed as a poem ensure that it is sincere? How can you ever think of such a thing? One more thing: if the author shows bravery in posting this to the internet, then we can say that she is ready for the negative comments as well, right?
like REALLY one of the best things ever, YOUR shiitty, FUCK YOU!
I don’t know who that person is, but they should stop leaving such disrespectful comments. This is sweet and cute. So many people can relate
I personally think it’s great!
Ha, had to laugh. How will you decide if you don’t like it, if you don’t read it?
You should be embarrassed by your shitty spelling.
Uh, as should you? *embarrassed is the true spelling, ass.
You guys spelled it exactly the same dumbass.
You idiot, she did spell embarrassed right.
idiot.
Haha, the guys are debating the context of the text, the women are bitching about grammar. winning.
I was very impressed with the mature and thoughtful responses discussing the context and meaning of this poem, then I hit the grammar nazis…. I agree with Erik though. Funny stuff.
haha
Seriously? I agree, how rude can you be? None the less ignorant, seeing as it is “embarrassed”. Good try though. This is sweet, and true, mainly for girls. If you dislike that Stumbleupon took you here, then change your freaking settings asshole. I appreciate this kind of stuff, which is why i use Stumbleupon. Finding this made me happy. Voicing your rude opinion was not needed.
p.s. you said you wasted moments of your life reading this, right? You actually wasted many more typing that incorrect and absurd response. So good job. You don’t deserve to ever get those moments back, either.
Um, you may have been correct with the settings suggestion if there weren’t a small problem. I will point that out and then fade away in the sweet silent darkness for a while:
The topic for this page is listed as “Quotes”. Is this a quote, really? (Of course this can be a valid quote with known sources, but it seems not to be the case.) What I understand from “Quotes” is this, for instance (from Stumble):
http://kelleytaylor.com/quotes/category/quirky/
For a suggestion, there is the “Relationships” topic in Stumble which this page may fit better (and I don’t have it in my preferred topics). Maybe we should ask LauraJul, who suggested this page to Stumble in the first place, to change the topic to something more suitable?
AGREE, I feel like this poem was written out of a girl getting caught up in some lies, and needed to redeem herself, probably baked some cookies with it too. Definitely a poem for girls to read, we know you ladies can have a guy friends, but you insist on not telling us about them. Which is why this poem is dumb, AND THE TRUTH SHALL SET YOU FREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE….hahah STUMBLE UPON = AWESOME even if it brings me to this shit.
You should probably learn proper english before trying to insult someone, genius. it’s YOUR. YOU’RE is a contraction containing the words you and are. You look like an idiot. Smooth move, slick.
So people with English as a second language are not permitted to insult others? The use of ‘proper’ English has nothing to do with someone ability or inability to insult or discuss something. Now YOU’RE (look at that, I used it correctly) the one who looks like the idiot. Not so smooth move.
I don’t think Taylor was talking to people learning English as a second language, merely stating that, whether English is your first or fifth language learned, using incorrect grammar and spelling makes you look stupid and unintelligent.
Aren’t you the same girl who tried to correct someone’s spelling earlier but embarrassed them self? Oh also, you only correct guys who disagree with the “poem” not girls who agree with it. Pretty bias. Now stop correcting people because you are just looking stupid.
And you look like a pretentious ass hole. Saying “You should probably learn proper english before trying to insult someone,” is like insisting on only talking to people wearing Hollister clothing. It’s the content in the message that matters not particulars of the chicken scratches used to convey it.
*your, not you’re.
You should be embarrassed by your shitty grammar while trying to bash someone else’s writing…. Your and you’re… learn the difference.
fuck you……you are only saying that because you are lonely and ugly….probably living in an apartment full of cats!
PAHAHAHAAH this made me laugh …i love this sooo much it totally lightened my mood. thatnkyou:)
Just stop, just because stumbleupon brought you to a website doesn’t mean you are morally obligated to look at it. If you are uninterested then why don’t you just press stumble! again, or dislike it. It’s pretty rude and hurtful to this person who put herself and her poetry out there. It takes a lot of courage to do that kind of thing, and an extremely weak person to bash her like that and make her feel small. To all the other guys saying how this is for girls, get over it. DON’T FRIGGING READ IT. Just be a human being and have respect for someone. Try putting your shit out there for everyone to read, then only to have strangers make you feel like shit. Way to go guys. Personally, I think it’s awesome that she’s doing this. Keep it up LauraJul
DON’T FEED THE TROLL
Rofl. I really wanted a “like” button for this comment. Best comment on this entire thread for sure
your clearly a disturbed little man
Arguing on the internet is like the special olympics. Even if you win, you’re still retarded.
Have a nice day.
*high five*
And you are just an ignorant prick. Go get an education. I will put money down that they have more athletic ability than you do.
fag
Steve, YOU should be embarrassed at your shitty grammar. if you’re going to talk someone down, at least do so while using proper grammar and spelling, instead of making yourself look ignorant. (;
You wasted my time with your shitty comment. It has to be YOUR poetry. You’re an asshole and probably never been in love.
YES! Vote for the removal of buzzkilling emo poetry on stumbleupon today! contact your congressman or web provider now!
Just click the button again?
Too bad your precious time was so cruelly wasted.
You are rude. This person is pouring their soul out to the world, and you don’t need to judge her like that! I know we don’t all know eachother, but I’m pretty sure that you wouldn’t say something like that to this woman’s face. You’re mean to hide behind the internet and attack somebody like so. Poetry comes in many shapes and sizes. This “poem” or literary expression makes me think and helps me appreciate what she’s trying to say…that’s poetry.
You should be EMBARRASSED about YOUR shitty grammar. Idiot.
u spelled embarrassed wrong dumb ass. Learn how to spell before you start criticizing someone else’s work.
If you didn’t want to ‘waste’ your precious time reading these ‘worthless’ words why would you ‘waste’ more time finding more ‘stuff’ like this on stumbleupon better still why would you ‘waste’ time complaining about?
– Just Wondering
you sir are a prick. WOW. you need to change your outlook on life my man or you will be alone and in your parents basement for quite a long time.
Why hasn’t anyone mentioned that this guy spelled “embarrassed” wrong while critiquing somebodies writing? Haha Now THAT’S embarrassing.
Oh, they have… good job ya’ll.
Before you criticize someone’s poetry, or any of someone’s writing, you should probably at least spell check your own comment. If his or her poetry made him or her look like a “loser,” then you should probably know that you look equally foolish for your pathetic basic understanding of the english language. It’s “your,” and check the rest of your spelling before you criticize.
You should be ashamed of your incorrect grammar and spelling errors. The correct way of saying this is “you should be embarrassed by your.” In fact, she is not shitty poetry and, therefore, the term “you’re” indicting “you are” is incorrect. As well, there are two “s”‘s and an “a” in embarrassed. Judging by your ignorance of the english language, you are not qualified to critique poetry.
Are you aware that English is not the only language to have poetry? I’m sure there are hundreds, if not thousands, of people who cannot speak a work of English but could provide excellent comments and critics on poetry. You’re being very ethnocentric. Furthermore, your desperate attempt to clutch on to any flaws in grammar and spelling makes you seem very petty. Some of the arguably and most influential authors and poets chose to ignore spelling and grammar; Some examples of this are Kerouac, Ginsberg, Chaucer and the list is much longer. I write poetry and I read poetry and I’m sorry to say this is not very good. It is unoriginal, lacks literary and poetic devices (except for a likely unintentional use of anaphora), and its just….. not well written. I appreciate that everyone has their opinions, but as someone who is linguistically gifted… this is tripe.
asshole^
You should be embarrassed at your shitty grammar skills. “…you’re shitty poetry.” Really? How does that make sense? Obviously your teachers wasted moments of their lives “teaching” you.
wow that was so wrong of you to say that. everyone has there own mind and heart, and every heart says something different. you shouldnt disrespect someones work because you dont like it. if you dont like go on to something elso not be hatefull to someone u dont even know.
For steve bonolis and others like him
You are a shit! click the close button of your browser if you didn’t like.. Get off this page you shitty loser. Keep away you badass! !
If you think it’s so SHITTY then why is it when you stumble upon her work you read it? just dont read then you jerk!!! To each it’s own…
Well all of you are stupid. I use this site all the time, and if i dont want to read something, i dont. If i dont like it, i think, “Oh, this is dumb.” and then wanna know what i do? Click the stumble button and move on. There really was no need to leave such a negative comment about someone else’s work. Go take a midol psycho.
I believe the “you’re” that you’re looking for is spelled “your” and embarrassed should be spelled the way it is right here. Grammar and spelling for the win.
You fail at life. I pit you.
It’s missing the part where she says, “But listen, if you feel the same way then I just want to be friends. You’re kind of creepy. I see you more like a brother who buys me expensive things. No hard feelings?”
I’ve heard that before. She also cheated on me.
BULLSHIT! the male equivalent:
“honey can i have a blow job? come on honey, i know its late and your tired and your sick but i love you soooo much.”
ha ha love it! simple and to the point =P
O___O
How did this turn into a subject of gender?
I thought it was nice.
Will you people calm down and click the stumble button?
Poof! All your troubles have been solved.
I’ve heard this before. But in the end, she told me they were lies after all.
I just want someone to use the words “your” and “you’re” correctly.
I agree. Let’s be friends.
Right?? They should just take a second to think to themselves.. “Hmm, are we trying to say ‘you are’? Or ‘your’ like a possession. For godsakes.
Also, it’s a cute sentiment (pertaining to ‘Sure, I Talk To Other Guys’), but you’d only need to say those things if your current boyfriend is a jealous s.o.b. who doesn’t trust you. Or you’re feeling guilty.
I feel like I am the jealous type, and I do get kinda angry at my girlfiend. but when she has guys coming to pick her up for the weekend to take her back to their place to hang out, and since she’ll be sleeping on their couch or whatever then I feel like i sometimes have a right to be angry. am i wrong?
I’d hate to say it but if she’s sleeping on multiple dudes couches she’s probably a cheatin’ cunt. Not once have I ever gone to a dudes house just to sleep on his couch… there is no reason for that! I can also say that now I am in a long term relationship (3 1/2 years) I would NEVER nor have I ever (since the relationship) stayed at another guys house! My boyfriend is not the jealous type but jesus that’s so disrespectful to him!
hahahahaha i hear that all the time.
I just wish everyone would use proper grammar, but I don’t think they teach it any longer. On point, the girl is brave. I wrote tons of terrible poetry to guys when I was young. I don’t think I’d ever have the guts to post it on the internet.
hehe.
I agree that it’s garbage, not for the style but for the content. It’s written either for an insecure jealous loser that she shouldn’t be wasting her time on anyway, or it’s written for the writer herself to convince her that she’s a good girlfriend who loves her partner.
As for the issue of stumble? The whole point is to be subject to sites that we would regularly never get to. If you don’t like it, stumble on young friend:)
Fuckin chicks, man.
fuck you. women would be fine without men around. ignorant bastard.
there would be no babies without men…
i dont understand why grammar annoys people so much. as long as you know what theyre saying it doesnt matter if they used the wrong their theyre there. it annoys me more when people correct stupid spelling mistakes than when people make them.
and as for this little poem, it seems to me like a sterling example of a double standard. see if a guy has ever or will ever say anything like this to his lady….i dont think it would be considered cute.
I don’t know, I can see how you would look at it that way however I think that if a guy had the guts to say something so justified there might be some that find it cute. Shoot I think it’s great if some of the guys I know try to think about stuff on their own. But that’s just coming from a female teen-aged perspective.
They correct grammar because things like punctuation and capitalization are important. Remember, there is a difference in helping your Uncle Jack off a horse and helping your uncle jack off a horse. There is also a difference between saying “Let’s eat, Grandma!” and “Let’s eat Grandma!”
Alright sure but who really has to correct “your” and “you’re”? When people use these incorrectly, it’s not like you think they’re going to jack off a horse. You can still understand the meaning of the sentence pretty easily… greg’s totally right.
Ok I understand the sentiment in this but it comes off a little like something a slut would say. NOT saying you are one. It just comes off that way, to me. Not into the cliche repetition and if you or anybody cant take the criticism then dont post youre shit up because it will be criticized. Dont expect the praise your parents never gave you.
i really don’t see how this paragraph relates at all to a slut. what its saying is that the girl is friends with other men, but doesnt have the same feelings for them as she does for her significant other. i think that makes her sound more faithful that she is able to keep platonic relationships with other guys, and still keep a loving relationshio with her boyfriend. this paragraph just sounds like reasurance for him that she is his, and only his.
Did any one else relies this isn’t a poem, but a quick paragraph….. like seriously the punctuation would be totally different if it was a poem. Anyone who actually reads poetry would think oh short paragraph OK. NOT A POEM!! If it was ever other line would be her main word such as Sure, and Yeah, with a comma then stating what she would be defending then followed by her statement in the next line “But not as much as you” and so forth.
Just hit the stumble button, it’s not that hard. For those who can’t You’re idiots. Change your stumble settings! Oh LOOK I used Personal Pronouns Correctly!
I think it was a good poem, don’t let a douche bag get you down.
Good job with the personal pronouns! Spelling, punctuation and grammar may not be far behind.
I agree. I don’t think this is an actual poem. But that isn’t really the issue. Everyone is clearly entitled to their own OPINION. Nothing is right, Nothing is wrong. I don’t think you have to freak out on a person just because they wrote something that they were feeling at the time. By freaking out, I mean calling them stupid or an asshole. I also don’t agree with calling their work “shitty”. That, STEVE, was completely rude and uncalled for. If you don’t agree just give your reasons and move on. Not that big of a deal. If you enjoy putting other people down, then you have a mental problem and should see a psychologist.
A better poem would probably go something like,We’re no strangers to love
You know the rules and so do I
A full commitment’s what I’m thinking of
You wouldn’t get this from any other guy
I just wanna tell you how I’m feeling
Gotta make you understand
Never gonna give you up
Never gonna let you down
Never gonna run around and desert you
Never gonna make you cry
Never gonna say goodbye
Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you
We’ve know each other for so long
Your heart’s been aching
But you’re too shy to say it
Inside we both know what’s been going on
We know the game and we’re gonna play it
And if you ask me how I’m feeling
Don’t tell me you’re too blind to see
Never gonna give you up
Never gonna let you down
Never gonna run around and desert you
Never gonna make you cry
Never gonna say goodbye
Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you
Ok I wasn’t going to post anything just read, kinda creepy I know, but no one said anything about this, so I feel compelled to say something.
We all just got Rick Rolled. That is freaking hilarious.
It just amazes me that people get so wrapped up on one little thing, such as grammar, or the validity of “the poem” to see other things going on around them.
Now THIS is hysterical! Rick Rolling an entire comments section! Total WIN. You rock!! LMAO
Guys, its just a fucking poem…
Everyone needs to calm down. If you don’t like it, there is a dislike button and Stumbleupon will not bring you to things like it again…then you will never have to look at it again. And some guys can just feel insecure about a girlfriend spending a lot of time with another guy, that doesn’t make them crazy and controlling. This is just a girl expressing her feelings, stop criticizing her.
contrary to popular belief, i think this is a wonderful poem =)
sure it may not relate to everyone, but if it doesnt, they have absolutely no right to critisize you like that. you didnt ask for their opinions, and i think you should ignore every single one of them. sometimes men are wonderful people, but a little bit jealous, and this relates to all the people in those kind of relationships. (i’m in one btw, and to the guy that said girls should leave someone like that, they have absolutely no idea what theyre talking about, the jealous person obviously cares about them enough to be jealous in the first place) but anyways. good job on the cute poem, keep righting, and forget about all these other assholes that think they are important enough and their opinion matters.
have a good day!
The jealous guy cares enough to care about them, but does not respect enough to trust them. I can be kind of jealous myself too, but I would never do anything to limit my girlfriend’s freedom (which she wouldn’t allow in the first place)
Oh, she DID ask for our opinions. She asks for, and receives, our opinions in the name of “comments” under a dedicated section in each blog post. But still, how can you expect Laura to ignore us just because we disagree with her? Haven’t you ever came across a “quote” in the blogosphere which tells how great it is to think, to challenge existing thoughts? How can’t we have the right to criticize? Are the comments section just for expressing how cute this is (and actually contributing nothing to anybody)? Why does your opinion matter, and not ours? Why, why, why?
One final thing: this is reblogged. It’s not Laura’s. The author of this probably does not even know about these comments. She states this explicitly right below the picture (“via Inside My Universe”), but obviously you don’t care enough to notice that.
Thank you for being you.
sincerely,
(name above)
Dear Mr C,
I appreciate your thoughts. You seemed to be the only one open to both sides input. You never “bashed” on anyone, but still, respectfully, got your opinion across. Bravo for being open minded and with holding your intelligence at the same time. In fact, the only way others could reply to your comments were rude and meaningless, never really addressing what you stated previously. This may not be necessary, but I thought someone should praise you, even if that person is just a freshman in high school. Who might I say, conducts herself with more poise then adults, in this given situation.
From,
OpenMind
*withholding
I didn’t really even think about the poem (or paragraph or what ever it was) until I read all the comments. Everyones perspective on this actually made me think about what it meant.
I thought the poem/whatever you want to call it was cute. But seriously people all the comments were ridiculous. This just shows how sucky humanity is that people would spend this much time bashing it. Have a heart.
I think its nice. For me it isn’t about reassuring the boyfriend that your not cheating. Its letting him know that he is special, that there is something in him that no one else possesses. Sometimes its just nice to hear these words.
Sometimes it is nice to give someone a compliment.
There is no need for the bitter attitudes that are being displayed. I don’t understand how taking the time to write insults is in any way satisfying. Its simply mean; unnecessary.
Anyways, sure its not famous inspirational poetry. But it is truth.
And personally Laura, I like it.
note to self: writing a spur of the moment poem just because I can, can inspire pages of arguments over weather or not what was written was a good representation of reality
Thank you so much for a post that made my night!
Laura,
All the above comments that are rude and thoughtless are from rude and thoughtless people. Im a guy and I loved what you wrote. Theres a meaning in there that shallow douches cant get.
You should remove all those nasty posts.
Personally I feel like there’s the shallow douches who fall for this shallow poem and those who can see past all the cliche bullshit.
This is so cute and very relatable
fisrt, why does it matter whether its a bad poem or not. Im gonna have to remind you all that there are things and people in our lives that we will come across and not like. Honestly it is a shitty poem and being a woman I would never give that to my man and expect them to be satisfied with it. its impersonal. but that is besides the point. stumbelupon’s purpose is to guide us to thinks that we key word MIGHT like! its a hit or miss everytime you hit that button! To end this who the fuck cares its a fucking poem???!?!?!?!?! its pathetic that this site is bothering you that much. if you hate it that much why take the time to even comment on it? the only reason i am commenting is because of how out of hand this has gotten. (I do agree that they should put this in with the relationship topics)
wow, do you guys know how stupid you ALL sound, sitting here arguing over something stupid. alright, yes stumbleupon.com does direct you to these blogs but YOU DO HAVE A NICE LITTLE BUTTON up there and i dont really think you are that stupid to push it, i mean because thats how you got to that page. seriously skim the page before if it look like something you would read, then freaking read it. if not then DONT read it. do you even understand how rude of you mr. steve to even say such a mean disgrating thing like that. i dont think you would EVER say that to your mother if you would have found this upon her things. seriously if you talk like that, i guess i could understand i guess, i mean what are you between your late 20s early 40s, well with the name steve your have to be some where in your 30s. seriously grow up. are your 12 calling someone a loser? you ALL should feel low right now. this girl was just expressing her opinion, EVERYONE is allowed to their opinion, but lets try to leave these bad hurtful digrating comments to ourself, because how would we feel if they were on something of ours?
thanks, :] and sorry to anyone who is a little pist by this. :]
I’ll repeat here what I said earlier today:
It’s a reblog. It’s not Laura’s.
“via Inside My Universe” it says.
my heart melted when i read this. i now think its okay that my gf to take huge dicks all the time, cause none feel as small as mine
haha jk
Ok I can’t even finish reading all of these comments. Why is it that people have to write comments on peoples blogs if all they are going to do is hurt someone? This person put this up to share with the public, not be picked at by everyone.
Accept the fact that other people post and like things you don’t. If you don’t like it then press the thumbs down button and move on. It’s not that difficult.
You don’t have to be an ass and have these huge discussions over a post online.
Be nice, don’t be a dick
I am one of the other people who enjoyed this poem and appreciate what was posted. And thank you to the other people who put the rude posters in there place.
thats what she said a couple weeks before she left me for the guy she texted non stop
Seriously? You guys sound like a bunch of high school kids. If you disagree, deal with it and shut up. If you agree, that’s great and now get over it.
wwwooowwww!!! i cannot believe i just read through all these comments…HIL-AR-I-OUS!!!!!
“I find a fatal flaw in the logic of love and go out of my head. You love a sinking stone, that’ll never elope, so get used to the lonesome. Girl you best atone some, don’t leave me no phone number there.”
Fine to discuss this sort of things, but please show respect for other opinions. As long as we keep that in mind, we won’t have to use words like “FUCK YOU ASSHOLE”, which, in my opinion, are things written by people who don’t think before they write.
Laura, nice poem! Not everyone likes it but it’s still good work
Really expresses a feeling.
And all the people who condemn every responder for writing long reactions: some folks, like me, like to read those, if you don’t that’s ok, then click the “stumble!” button for yourself. No need to call them names
I’m not the only one who is saying this, but I just wanted you to know that there is nothing wrong with discussions (about anything) nor with English as a 2nd language, like me
@Cora, I get your point but try to make it in a calm way
@ some other people, your response in this topic saying “YOU FUCKIN IDIOTS WHY ARE YOU SO
oops
“WHY ARE YOU SO DUMB TO DISCUSS THESE THINGS SO MUCH???!! ZOMG!!”
That’s because we like to think, and think a lot, about problems like this
Thank you!
I agree with Roel! Will you all just shut up if you don’t like it and move on!!!!
Alright middle schoolers bored and looking for something to argue about, it’s not that hard to just press the stumble! button again and move on, is it? haha that’s pretty pathetic you have to voice your opinion when it’s not her fault stumble brought you to this web page anyway. get a life, seriously. if you don’t like the poem, it was OBVIOUSLY not written for your benefit.
The responses were more interesting than the poem itself, so it wasn’t an entire waste of a stumble.
Yeah, I was thinking the same thing when I was reading this to pass the time. XD
wow there is so much hatred in these comments! i think everyone should just chill out a bit. no need to get angry at the poor girl if you don’t like it. just forget about it and move on. or if you feel strongly enough to tell her, just say calmly that you don’t agree, then move on. everyone has their own opinion, just remember: yours is no more important than anyone else’s.
Stole this from an Elvis song just switch genders.
This poem gives me a boner for realz.
Of course it is ok to not like the poem, but you don’t have to be downright mean. If you heard this person read the poem personally, there is no chance at all that you would walk up to her and say the stuff you say here. Even thought you don’t have to see the persons face doesn’t mean that it won’t hurt her what you say. And of course, you are free to say your opinion, but please show some respect and kindness. If you think it sucks, you don’t have to say so. It is possible to come with constructive critisism.
i dont think poets want criticism, they want freedom of expression
Hmmm. I like the comments on here. Let me embarrass myself by saying i was sent this link by a girl i just told I would no longer speak to her due things I am not going to discuss. But if your stumble stalking me this for you.
I’m the one who made you smile
I’m the one who made you laugh
Because you sent this link to me you can firmly kiss my ass
Happy stumbling! =-)
To the poet. While this poem makes me angry at the person who wanted me to read it. Congrats on the pen and dont listen to the BS hating. Write for you and no one else!
Love it! Very cute! might use it as my facebook status! haha
Woah. I think you guys need to chill out.
Girls cant be friends with guys. Guys always want to touch girls it just don’t work that way and girls know it.
If your statement is true then it goes both ways. It’s human nature to have attractions to other people. Even go as far as thinking of being with those people. It’s a choice not to act upon it. People have self control and a sense of loyalty. Some it’s weak, thus cheaters happen, but if you go by the logic that no girl can have guy friends because they all just want to touch her, then no one should have friends. Girls think about touching others way more then people realize.. Men aren’t the only pervs.
Not really. I have a bunch of guy friends who don’t want to just “touch me”.
But if that’s your opinion, then I respect that.
That was the longest list of comments. The fact that this last comment was posted earlier today is the strangest part. Sure this poem wasn’t the type of poem I like either. But there’s no reason to be rude and disrespectful about it. It’s called constructive criticism. If you don’t like the poem than you don’t have to be that negative. Every negative comment can be turned into a positive comment. Instead of using harsh and mean words, you could’ve all just given the girl pointers on how she can go about fixing the poem. I love writing poetry myself. I always write and rewrite my poetry until I am happy with it. I have a blog as well, but I write for myself. When I do receive comments I enjoy reading other peoples opinions and thoughts on the poems. I have never received such negative comments on it. Every comment that gets made needs to be taken with a grain of salt. Poetry is a way to express different feelings and ideas. I use it as a cathartic way to let my feelings out. Sure the poem wasn’t exactly the right structure, but that doesn’t make it any less of a poem. No one can tell you what is or isn’t a poem. Because it’s your thoughts, opinions and feelings being written down on paper. I’m also a big grammar nut as well, but the sentences and spelling errors that were being corrected on here were ridiculous. There’s no need to be rude or call someone stupid when correcting people’s grammar or spelling errors. If you don’t like it, than just don’t read it and move on. If you just want to bitch about how awful you thought the poem was or the spelling and grammar. Than you obviously missed the whole entire point of commenting.
youre all really stupid honestly. if you dont want to hear opinions, then dont go on stumbleupon. SIMPLE AS THAT[:
hey, do you mind if i use this in my blog?
Wow, what blows me away is how so many people can care so much about a mindless quote as to devote so much time to argue whether for or against it; rather than devoting such time to something more worthwhile. Surely there is something in this world more worth your arguments than this?
Jesus. You all just need to calm the fuck down. I don’t think I’ve ever come across a more trifling argument. Just. Chill. Out.
And also, who even said this was a poem? It’s not structured like a poem should be. It looks like one of those inspirational sayings that are EVERYWHERE on the internet, are you going to argue about all of those too?
If the answer is yes, here is a new one to go at each others’ throats over:
“Be calm in arguing; for fierceness makes error a fault, and truth discourtesy.”
you are a lying slut. women are all demon spawn.
Women are NOT demon spawns. There are some women out there that tend to do things that hurt people and are not nice, but men do it as well you must know. Half of the time it’s men cheating on women, and then those women usually turn out to cheat on their boyfriend/husband/etc. So before you go bashing on women, make sure you learn the facts.
& For the person at the top. I agree with the picture/quote. I think some guys freak out way to much. Then there are the women who do it aswell. It’s nice to be reassured at times when we doubt things. Would you like to keep doubting everything, I don’t think so.
You don’t have to sit here and bash on this persons thing. You might be upset at your own relationship/old relationship. But freaking out on this might make you feel better, but it’s only making you look like a fool.
I am writing on this because I simply wanted to tell you MY opinion since you freely can express yours. So take a minute and breathe and STFU.
Sincerely,
Truth Teller.
Wow. I am just amazed at people’s stupidity. Every time I see someone bashing on someone else’s blog, I wanna say the same thing as everyone else – just click the damn Stumble button again. No one shoved this screen in your face and forced you to spend time thinking about it or commenting on it. Jesus, do you have nothing better to do with your lives?? Take the internet with a grain of salt people – I don’t understand, but I’m sure that it’s the case, that some of you just get off on being controversial – getting your o-so-intelligent-and-insightful thoughts out there. Let’s just not be douches, guys. Come on. Have a little more dignity.
I think the poem is just about how they feel about the person they are in love with. Like nobody can top the way that person makes them feel, and I can definitely relate to it. I think its beautiful.
everyone has aids! aids aids aids aids aids!
Guys there’s a comment section for a reason: so you can voice your opinions!
FREEDOM OF SPEECH!!!
Hahaha i watched team america last night!!!! and guys i think you can think what you want about it and criticism is fine but saying that( “you should be embarresed at you’re shitty poetry. i wasted moments of my life on your worthless words, and i will never get them back. screw you. take this shit off stumbleupon. it doesn’t deserve to be on there… loser”) is just plain rude and mean. I mean, really, what’s wrong with you? Did you just feel like being an arsehole?
this sounds like something a whore would say when she’s found out.
DON’T FUCKING TALK TO ANYONE ELSE. YOU’RE MINE.
Epic win.
Okay, You all have completely lost your minds. Most of you anyways. This stament is saying that even though there are other guys no one is like him. Duh, This isn’t desparation idiots. This is simply telling a guy that no one can make her feel as nice inside as him
So instead of saying how it “wasted your time” Just stop because no one wants to see it. It’s probably because your dumb ass can’t get someone to say this to you. I wouldn’t if you a giant jerk. So shut up and go away
Hi, um so StumbleUpon took me to this site and i started reading that comments and i would just like to say…
…who gives a fuck?
As an Artist my work is critiqued all the time. And as an Artist this is to be accepted and expected. Not everyone will like your work and there will be some whom simply praise it. As far as this writing goes, it was a great attempt but, it did not move me nor did it express depth of feeling from the writer. Keep working at it. Don’t give up.
I stumbled upon a poem.
But the true discovery was in the comments.
Steve Bonolis is a well trained troll.
Mr. C is a well educated, not to mention well opinionated (synonymous, I know), devil’s advocate.
And each person fed him entertainment with their words. Which in turn fed me entertainment.
I thank you all.
I have no real objections to this except the fact it’s missing a word or two and isn’t making a very good case for whoever wrote it and their relationship. I just stumbled onto it via stumbleupon as many here, and after leaving this I will press the stumble button and never look back. I suggest that to more people. Arguing is futile. Everyone always thinks they’re right. I could say ” Only one person here is making a valid argument, ” and every person would more than likely believe it was them or feel compelled to ask who it was.
xxxxx
Have fun.
I bet you a 13 year old girl wrote this about her boyfriend of 2 weeks.
STOP TROLLINNG. It’s one person’s blog. Give the girl a break. Everyone is different. Everyone’s opinion therefore cannot be the same. So if she wants to write about sappy stuff that she believes in then let her. People who talk shit about things they think is stupid is also writing shit depending on the person who’s reading this shit POV. Are we done now? Kay thanks.
Isn’t that a little bit ironic? “Everyone is different. Everyone’s opinion therefore cannot be the same.” But of course, if your opinion contradicts that of the original poster’s, you have to keep quiet? I stumbled upon this poem and found that it was not the type of thing I was interested in, so I downvoted it, yeah. But I chose to give my opinion on it, as well, because I felt that I wanted to express my opinion. But now you’re telling me that because my opinion is different than the person that wrote the poem, I’m not allowed to say that? Ironic how you so fiercely defend the poet’s right to write her opinions freely but simultaneously tell any dissenters to keep their mouths shut.
P.S. Just because someone has an opinion that is different from yours, doesn’t mean they are “trolling”. l2internet.
Also. Poetry is an art. Anything can be considered art depending on the person’s perception of it. Therefore to assume this is a poem, it is an art. Satisfied? Are we finished trolling now?
You know i never comment on these things but i’m making an exception for this. This was lovely. And to any of the guys who hated on this, you’re losers. If you don’t like it hit the fucking stumble button. You can’t expect to like everything you see.
ok yeah it might be “stupid” but even though you say guys should never get this from their girlfriends.. i think its sweet. Girls are just saying and reassuring and making you feel good. its always awesome to get cute things here and there to keep the spark going i think.
isnt this fun?
yall all just need to chill the fuck out and go smoke some weed
why you mad bro?
All I have to say is my girlfriend made this argument and when I made it back to her about other women she wasn’t to comfortable with it.
actually, stumbleupon allows you to mold its results to bring to you by the thumbs up and thumbs down button. apparently, you either didnt know that, or you have been liking the results of this nature. (for those of you that talk shit to the innocent bloggers who didnt ask stumbleupon to expose them.)
What a nice coincidence this is, just on the day I come back to see what happened around here! Thanks for bringing me back from my grave.
Please recheck what I’ve said in previous posts: Laura actually submitted this herself to Stumbleupon. So she did ask to be exposed. This is not an accusation to her, it’s perfectly normal for her to do so; but just your argument is wrong here. Why doesn’t anybody argue the idea in the quote itself rather than getting caught on irrelevant details?
I happened to LOVE this, and related to it completely! You go girl! Keep up the awesomeness! <3
YA’LL ARE ALL FUCKING TROLLS! WHO GIVES A FUCK. SMOKE SOME WEED OR SOMETHING, YA TENCE FUCKS!!
I really don’t think this quote, or poem, was intended to reassure a jealous man that she would never cheat. I think it was simply I cliche sort of ” you’re the apple of my eye” type of thing, like she can see how other guys are nice/funny but no one compares to the one she loves. And, as Mr. C said, she this blogger didn’t write it, she just likes it. That said, I still didn’t think it was that great of a statement, but that’s just me. Anyone else who agrees with that, stumble again. I don’t usually waste time to comment on other comments but for the people who’s rudeness was getting out of hand, maybe you had a bad day and you are letting your anger out, or maybe your just an asshole hiding behind the cover of the internet, but all I’m saying is I feel sorry for you if the life you have is commenting on blogs.
Does anyone else enjoy pie?
I LOVE PIE!
IS DAT EMBARASSHINGG??? DERRRR
uh…its just some dumb 999,999 in a million internet poem. Chill.
pretentious fucks
get over your selves
The poem was nice (personally I think people are reading too much into it) but reading the comments was where the real fun was at. Everyone just correcting each others grammar was pretty annoying though. Most of you people are just a bunch of idiots that lack the ability to accept the point of view of someone who doesn’t agree with you. Instead, you just call them stupid or a loser or insult them in some other way, and it’s pretty pathetic. Mr C is one of the only rational thinking people in here, and he still gets bashed because you don’t like what he has to say. It’s so sad. Also everybody saying “If you don’t like it then don’t comment on it” is horrible. Putting something up on the internet gives everybody the right to express their opinion on it, and negative feedback on anything can still be good feedback. You can’t just say that everything is awesome and nothing is wrong with anything and you can’t just bash people who don’t agree with you. It’s ignorant and pathetic and most of the people here are guilty of it and refuse to accept it. Also, shut the fuck up about the whole Your vs You’re thing, because you don’t know if the person commenting even speaks proper English, if they have some sort of mental deficiency, or if they’re only 8 years old, so you have no right to correct people. Everybody makes mistakes. Deal with it. “Learn to use proper grammar before you insult someone” is not a valid argument. It’s just what you say when you have nothing intelligent to say. Have a good life people, and I hope that the ignorant ones don’t breed.
*click*
get your heads outta your ass, start thinking outside the box, reality is if a girl has to explain herself then she should not be doing what she was doing at the time(s) of doing a such action in question
Okay, I stopped reading these comments after a while just because I’m stuck on a little statement Mr. C made…
“I’m a university student and I very much have a life, thank you!”
Okay, seriously…being a university still means he could be a complete sleeze, hunkering and sulking in his dorm room, jacking off to pictures of unicorns and just on the internet because it is the girlfriend he never had.
Stop trying to be smarter than everyone else on the internet. I am a huge fan of debate but it’s this wonderful thing called CONCESSIONS and if you’re really a university student you’d know how to use them properly. So really, who looks like the ass? The kid that has no idea how to write a simple “university” standard paper.
As for this little writing, it’s whatever, ya know? It speaks to some and not for others…doesn’t that sound like any other writing ever? Some may say “Ooo, what a slut” while others say “Awh, I can totally relate.” This is what writing is about, evoking a response (just not from some jag who named their internet self “Mr. C”).
Oh well, apparently it’s time for me to get back here. I doubt that you will read this, though (I think I’m the only one who constantly gets back here to see what’s been written). I like this a lot, you see. (And I like you too, Laura; your posts are interesting, even though I can’t relate to some of them.
)
You are perfectly correct in your claim that being a university student does not necessarily imply “having a life”. That’s my fault; I recalled all my memories that could count as a sign of “life” while writing that sentence, but I didn’t reflect them into the text itself. Do you want me to get more specific on that? Here we go: I’m a 20 years old “university student” who attends the electronics engineering department of a nice school in Turkey. I’ve had two girlfriends up to this moment: one was in high school and it lasted for a year and a half, and the other was in the university and it lasted for approximately 7 months. (We broke up in April, and she’s dated two more guys since that time. I have valid reasons for being pessimistic right now, you see.) I also had many failed relationship attempts at different times. I don’t believe in anything nice anymore; I just believe in crude logic. That’s it. (I thought, for some time, that it was post-breakup behavior to dismiss emotions in writing; but apparently it wasn’t. It just stuck.) No writing can ever convince me of anything anymore; I’ve seen girls who write pages and pages about how they love some guy, but yet who are also capable of turning that guy’s life to hell if they ever manage to get him. (Thankfully, that guy was not me. My girlfriend was capable of creating that hell without any writing; which is a feat I always appreciate.) Words are really just words. Nothing more. Still, you may be able to get what you want with words, that’s for sure. (Insert English proverbs about how important it is to talk to people nicely here.) But if you’re lying, or if you’re writing just for your own “pleasure” (which includes cases of self-assurance) then there aren’t any nice feelings there; simply put, that’s cheating. That is an act which will, somehow, somewhere, have a consequence. Hopefully.
I’m actually a supporter of music when it comes to expressing feelings. That’s the only thing which feels… correct. I don’t know why. (If somebody sang this “poem” we have here, I would definitely be impressed with it more. Contradictory? Very much so. But I wouldn’t care as long as it’s a good song; I mean, in terms of the melody.)
Things are getting off-topic here, right? Let me get back to what I was trying to say. Oh yes, we were considering whether I have a life or not. You see, there’s this problem: Questioning my “life” was done by someone else before you (I’m too lazy to go up the comments and look at the name) and believe me, it has NOTHING to do with what I’m trying to say in here. I simply replied to them (however not exactly assuringly) and never looked back after that, but you just brought up the subject again. That’s unfair. That’s, actually, pretty much against the values that people who support debates, like you, should hold in very high regard. I could even call it a logical fallacy. I’d like to learn your comment on whether this writing (I mean, the original “poem”) does indeed evoke an emotional response in you; or if a girl’s need of reassurance just for “talking with other guys” is something that the modern society (and the jerks who force them to feel so) should be ashamed of. But no, you simply chose to attack me. If you are “really” a fan of debate (see how annoying this “really” word is? As in “…if you’re really a university student…”), just give us your opinion; not your insults. We already have plenty of them here in this post.
I’ve never tried to be smarter than anybody else in here. I’m just in a mood for listening to opinions about this post, because of all those terrible relationships I’ve been through during my time after high school (I have really weird stories). If you could give me an example of one of my statements where I accuse other people of incompetency, that would be great. (Something like “some jag who named their internet self Mr C” or “you’d know how to use them properly” or “the kid that has no idea how to write a university paper”, maybe?) Oh, and how the hell can you get to the conclusion that I am not able to write a “university paper” anyway?
(calm down Mr C, you’re not here to fight, you’re here to talk… keep that in mind.)
By the way, C is the first letter of my surname. I wanted to keep my real name or my nickname to myself; so this is the first thing that came to my mind.
You’re definitely talented, though – you just made me write a long self-defense, in the middle of the night, over some implied (and some explicit) insults. But I guess I was in the mood for writing anyway, and I’m relatively angry these days since I had to deal with crazy relationships -again- lately. Sorry if I went beyond the line. I do hope you understand me right now.
I -really- just want opinions.
And yes, I agree if you say it’s ironic I express myself with writing here, but that’s the only medium we have. Besides, you wouldn’t want to hear me singing anyway.
P.S. I can tell the story if you insist.
With the sudden urge of signing this text since it’s too long,
Sincerely,
Mr C (yes, without the dot. I’m picky.)
This is Impressive !
Seriously, I don’t think its extraordinary but I do think its true, and all these people saying this bullshit that females just want to say it to other females is just that…. bullshit… I can’t tell you how many times I have heard guys say the same shit… We all may talk to people… men or women but when we have our ONLY nobody else matters in the world….. So guys stop being pussy ass bitches and saying shit like females just need to hear it from other females…..
Girls do this because they need attention. Guys do the same thing. We all love attention, does it mean we’re attention whores? Well, yes! But once you realize it and understand that attention does not mean affection you will grow up a bit and see people aren’t as devilish as you may have once thought.
LAMEEEEE
I got tired of reading all of these “hilarious” comments, but did anyone notice how grammatically incorrect the poem is? There are missing words and words that don’t belong and it’s just not very good grammar. And, to me, it screams weakness and dependability. Just saying…
i wish if my ex girlfriend told me this before we broke up…
I stumbled upon this, presumably because I am a girl and therefore have girl interests (e.g. cute animals, knitting and the like). Because this has become such a heated discussion, I felt obliged to comment. I will admit that I only read about half of the comments. Nonetheless, while this is not my cup of tea, it’s nice for the girly-girls to have something to go, “Awww,” over. My initial response was, “… lame.” I’ve been in a committed relationship for quite some time and am currently engaged. I would never give this to my fiancé, because it’s pretty stupid. This is obviously something that a teenaged girl who has not experienced a mature relationship would say/write/give. It’s stupid and immature because it is repetitive, and in a trusting relationship, a nonissue. Even when someone in the relationship has an insecure moment, it shouldn’t require such triteness to cheer them up. Also, I would say that the beginning is a lie, and if not an outright lie then at least an unreasonable expectation. I’ve had conversations with men that were either funnier or more engaging than the ones I had with my fiancé (although, I wouldn’t tell him that… not because I’m a liar or because I hide things from him, but because that would be unnecessary and mean). I stick with him because it takes more than someone with eloquence and charm to hook me. It takes someone who is caring, dependable and thoughtful as well as eloquent and charming. He has a myriad of wonderful traits, and I understand that not everyone can put on their charming face everyday. But when you really care about someone, you shouldn’t need them to keep you entertained everyday, you should respect them enough to let them have an off day and be the one making them smile/laugh.
When you build a lasting relationship with someone, rather than just bide your time, you’re less likely to give it up for your cute neighbor/co-worker/classmate who can quote Pixar movies.
And honestly, I try not to make a habit of demeaning people’s cute but lame posts, but it seemed like Mr. C was trying to have a meaningful discussion and it was becoming a Boys vs. Girls thing, and I thought I’d bring a little reason to the girl’s side.
I liked the comments better than the post. Haha! I say yes to free speech!
sorry to burst your bubble but this isn’t poetry. Pablo Neruda is a poet and he writes POETRY. Real poetry.
Sorry.
Just saying…
Grammar police, priceless. thank you for being so witty with your name:).
“Steve” should be embarrassed by his horrible English. It’s deffinately *your*. And it’s *embarrassed* not embarresed. So fail to you, mr Steve. If you don’t like it, the stumble button is in the top left corner. (atleast it is for me.) just push it again. It’s really not that hard. I think this is a rather cute poem (: